Three
for One by Anastasia review
This story is a mystery story full
of suspense. I like the way that she created mystery by using very descriptive
adjectives and short sentences to create suspense. Also, further along the
story when the detective is hesitating. I like how she formatted the dialogue
and also how she had a scene where he talked to himself before going to the
bridge. She used rhetorical questions to make the scene seem more realistic.
Additionally, the way she used
coincidence made the story more intriguing. As the story continued, I began to
lose interest. All the “mysteries” were becoming so predictable. Also, the
story began to lose significance. Additionally, I believe that the story begins
to go a bit off track. She loses sight that the story was based on finding the
thing that the villain wants. I think that she gets a little too caught up in
the adventures.
I like how she concentrated on the
romance too. It reminded me of a Bond scenario. Lastly, the ending seemed so
rushed and forced. It would be better if she took the time to go through it and
think about a stronger, more dynamic ending to the story.
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